graduation

Nikki Branhut
Graduation

Do you know where you will be in 4 years? I know where I’ll be; I am going to be part of the graduating class of 2011 at Constitution High School. First of all, I am a hard worker. The second reason I’ m going to graduate is that school prepares me for my job. Thirdly, my family is very supportive and will help me succeed as much as possible.

I know that I’ll be graduating at CHS because I’m a hard worker. Being a hard worker helps me when the schoolwork gets tough. If I don’t understand an assignment, I will find someone who understand it and make sure I understand the assignment by the time we’re done Some people I know don’t do their homework, and I’m definitely not one of them. I always turn my projects in on time also.

I know that I’ll be graduating at CHS because school helps me prepare for my job when I grow up. People who have degrees make more money. With this extra money, I can live comfortably and I do what I want in my life.


I know that I’ll be graduating at CHS because I have my family. My family is very supportive of my high school career. They have helped me w/ my homework, bought me school supplies. My mom helped me learn how to read and when I was little my father read to me every night. They have helped me get this far and it would be a waste of their effort if I did not take advantage of what they have given me.

My hard work and diligence will help me with my tough schoolwork. I know that school prepares me for my job so I wont is a dropout. My family will be there when times get hard and provide me support. So , now you know why I can see myself in four years graduating from CHS. I will not be a dropout.

I decided to work on this essay because I think the introduction and conclusion are really good. It states my main points. It also has a good hook. My conclusion restates the main points, it also adresses the so what.