Friday, October 31, 2008

Revisised Thesis Statement and Introduction

I believe that Eleanor Roosevelt was one of the most influential women of the 20th century. Roosevelt was very active in politics As the wife of Franklin Delano Roosevelt, she had a huge amount of influence on his polices, such as the New Deal. She aalso coordinated the leglislate program for the League of Women Voters. She was also an important member of the Women's Trade Union League. She continued her legacy long after her husband's death. After FDR's death, she was appointed as a delegate of the United Nations.

1 comment:

Mr. Ackerman said...

Great job. I like your thesis statement. This looks like it will be a very interesting essay. I look forward to reading it.

Grade: Outstanding